''Clink, clink, clink!'' the china teacup rattled on the saucer. Jane stared in bewilderment at it.''How can it shake by itself?'' she wondered aloud.
Within minutes , the wall cracks slowly formed on the wall , the ground shook violently . Jane scream loudly and started to run out of the building where she was in it drinking the tea. However,before she open the door , the whole building collapsed , a gaping hole appeared and swallowed her like a hungry monster.
Arms flailing helplessly, Jane fell into a inky darkness. Jane felt like a blind and trapped animal in a cage. She could hardly move a inch except her head, she knew that the chances of being rescued were very low and thought that it would be the last day of her life.
Meanwhile, a curious crowd had gathered around the wreckage. Some even shook their head in disbelief while others just stood rooted on the ground in stunned silence.A passerby had obviously called the police and the police immediately sprang into action with their police dog by their side.
Jane knew that she would be rescued soon and began to wait patiently.Time flew ,the police had not even found Jane, so she felt frightened. She picked up a stone and hit it on the wall , hoped to give attention to the police,and it did. The police dog ran to the place where she was and tried to digged her out . When she was out , she thanked the police for rescuing her then call her parents to fetch her from where she was.
Tuesday, September 16, 2008
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Dear Jiewen,
Great effort in trying to use the beautiful phrases. Why don't you write your own story and fit in the phrases? Oh yes, remember to paragraph your work too.
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